Sounds pretty good. :) I like the overall feel of this song. It's soft and happy, putting off an aura of excitement without getting too synthy. Really helps with relaxation and good vibes. Also, I enjoyed the main chorus(or the climax in this version of the song). The build-up to it was well-done, but I think there needs to be a second instrument or some sort of FX at the beginning to boost instrument diversity and as a bonus, will help to catch attention for people skimming through songs. Other than that, I think what you have so far here is pretty well done. Hope to hear more.